Review Detail of midnight_bloom in Dandelion Memories

The story is quite unique. 🤗 Its so easy to get invested into it. I am so excited to know the twists, the why's. 💛 Storyline is good. Characters are designed well. Author knows how to end a chapter well with impactful scenes/statements. Areas for improvement, there are instances of tense switch between past and present (Im also guilty of this). Also, very subtly, there are instances of POV change in the narration, to 1st POV from third. Just choose one, and be careful of the switches. 🙂 Overall, it is a novel that truly offers something new to the platform. I'm thrilled. Keep on writing, author. All the best.