Definitely hooked. Soren as a character speaks to me personally. One nitpick I have not to have a chapter named failed escape if the chapter is about escaping. Other than that, the story's construction is superb, and I definitely like the details you paint each character with, like the fishing shop hat. I'm down for more.
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