Review Detail of VRW1 in Arcana Legends

I like the power system that he has when he talks about introducing it and it's something that I never heard of yet but it might be something like Ki or life force but a little Greek myth in there from the constellation and also the flow in the prologue was like WOW! I don't see that many errors but I read the prelude and a little bit of chapter 2 so I don't know. If so I hope it not any big mistake but I added this to the library for the meantime and give it more of a read. Keep it up, Author.