Review Detail of Time_Control in No Otaku with Harem System (English Version)

but he cahnging so fast that it's confusing.in one chapter he is like "I want a simple life" and in next chapter is a battle manica and in next chapter he says women are trouble some but next he says he want a relation and then again he say harem is trouble but then he say harem is fine and now he say he want build an organisation and a not a simple life.its all good but feel too fast .that's all

Let's say that the MC is a person without personal goals who just follow the flow of things. Although his willpower is unstoppable, it only keeps him moving forward but in himself, he does not have a goal, the MC changes his mind a lot as he advances in a purposeless path which can normally cause an existential crisis

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yep that's what I said in my above reply.i agree with everything u did to him but it cjhanges too fast.lets just say that he only want single relationship because that's the moral he is grown upon. but due to the exposure of strength and diffrent morals and viewpoint he gradually changes from that view and that become solidifies when the women with him is fine with that. but do this in an natural manner that include and adventure or exposure of difference etc which take like atleast 5 chapters.then we can make it acceptable. also if u focus on single aspect at a time. for eg strength.making a situation that shows the requirement of strength for survival.this doesn't need him to jumb infront a master and almost die like a xiamxia novel. simple the exposure of his new world and high light it like using concept of slavery to give him a ringing bell that world is not all colourfull but dangerous to expecially with this feeble stregth. if u do like that then not only will it be easy for u as u don't need to work on many aspect of charecter at the same time but also u can write many chapter on a single idea. hope this helps

this pic , it's that flower girl from deadman wonderland right?

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