Wow! This novel is good yet bad! The three episodes is becoming an info dump and I'm getting bored in reading it. Make it light to read so we readers can be immersed in novel. And what's with the too much use of adjectives, it sounded too exaggerated. The updating stability is good I guess since it's new.
OIdMan
Liked it!
ถูกใจI already edited the author's thoughts so that people can skip the second chapter if they are uninterested in world-building.
OIdMan:I know about the info dump, but I didn't know how else to blend in so much information. I have already written 8 chapters, and I packed only these first chapters with information. Thanks for the honest review!
OIdMan:I know about the info dump, but I didn't know how else to blend in so much information. I have already written 8 chapters, and I packed only these first chapters with information. Thanks for the honest review!