Review Detail of Amyn27 in The Journey after Death
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I like the story so far , love your choice of background and the World you decided to mix . The only thing that i hate is the MC personality , he is an ***** he has experience with life whereas good or bad ,with women too as you explained HOWEVER he is a fucking blushing mess . This mf blushes at every good looking woman he sees . It’s honestly tiring even some light teasing mf blush Except for that it’s nice
The Journey after Death
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Thank you for the review! As for the blushing mess... fair! But (unless I am terribly mistaken) his awkwardness arrives from most interactions with Rose rather him meeting a beautiful lady. Something- which I hopefully expressed well enough- is important for later on. The incontinency you mentioned is deliberate!