Review Detail of BlackSwordman1234 in Dark Soul System(DxD)

Item: Dark Soul System(DxD)
Rating: 5

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BlackSwordman1234นักเขียน2yrBlackSwordman1234

Rewriting my first ever Fanfic which had many errors in it. I changed all of the mistakes I made at the start and just for the record. This FF is connecte to my main FF. Lightning and Fire Given Form.

Dark Soul System(DxD)

BlackSwordman1234

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Cthulhu12Lv1Cthulhu12

Through some elden ring In there, I been gripping it non-stop. There is a lot of interesting things you could add 🙌🏽

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KokushibouLv4Kokushibou

I recommend fixing the sypnosis

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BlackSwordman1234นักเขียนBlackSwordman1234

True.

Kokushibou:I recommend fixing the sypnosis

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Lucy_CarlaLv4Lucy_Carla

when dxd arc starting..??

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BlackSwordman1234นักเขียนBlackSwordman1234

Maybe 5-6 chapters from the current chapter.

Lucy_Carla:when dxd arc starting..??

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JimmyBlahLv14JimmyBlah

Are you writing from your phone? Because you still need to run this through grammerly man

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BlackSwordman1234นักเขียนBlackSwordman1234

I do.

JimmyBlah:Are you writing from your phone? Because you still need to run this through grammerly man

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BlackSwordman1234นักเขียนBlackSwordman1234

I do use Grammerly and I write from a computer.

JimmyBlah:Are you writing from your phone? Because you still need to run this through grammerly man

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JimmyBlahLv14JimmyBlah

Yikes, really not trying to be rude but you might want to re-read the first chapter. I got like 2/3rds of the way through it and there’s like four spelling/grammar issues already 😅

BlackSwordman1234:I do use Grammerly and I write from a computer.

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BlackSwordman1234นักเขียนBlackSwordman1234

That’s it?

JimmyBlah:Yikes, really not trying to be rude but you might want to re-read the first chapter. I got like 2/3rds of the way through it and there’s like four spelling/grammar issues already 😅

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0vrLrd71Lv50vrLrd71

Wdym connected to your other fanfiction? same multiverse? world?

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BlackSwordman1234นักเขียนBlackSwordman1234

Multiverse.

0vrLrd71:Wdym connected to your other fanfiction? same multiverse? world?

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