Review Detail of IamLolicon in Exploring During Wartime: The Unknown

Nice work author! I had fun reading it... you're especially good and making the reader visualize the story by describing many details throughout the story! There are some minor grammatical mistakes but those are not enough to bother me, and since you're not a native English speakers (like me) it's very understandable and I'm sure you will improve on that in the future! The only tip I would give is that I would name the chapters a little more inviting to read, the chapter names can be a little boring to some! Anyway keep up the good work! I will keep following your progress! Cheers!