Review Detail of Venusean in The forbidden fruit

The Forbidden Fruit is a well-written story that immensely appeals to people who like romance, mafia and non-braindead characters. I haven't seen any noticeable flaws as per the writing and such. The character design is great and boosted by the author's take on perspective and POV which allow us to understand and deeply relate to the main characters. As for the world, it's a modern setting with underground society elements and seems compelling and interesting so far. Keep up the great work, author. Given it a read, everyone!