It was good but it was only the first chapter so i wont be putting 5 stars. One thing that really irritated me throughout the chapter was that when a character spoke they didn’t have “...” around what they spoke. An example for you would be “It is a beautiful day today,” he says to his neighbor. If you would be so kind as to fix that i will definitely keep reading.😁
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