Review Detail of Movezbatch in A Problem Shinobi

Oh my God just read the first chapter, what the **** is this shit, I'm about to die from second-had embarrassment, what were you thinking while writing this? This is like dream of a 13 year old, So edgy, so cool, so amazing ''normal'' guy First of all ''typical guy'' is apparently a world class genius who can invent shit but also dumb as **** that he can't see or understand that his girlfriend and ''best friend'' (how is he your best friend if he acts that way anyway, how could a normal person not a problem with him if he was good friends with him so much that he calls him best friend lol, what a dumbass) cheating on him. Loan sharks who are ready to kill and can casually give 1 MILLION DOLARS to a worthless nobody are so easy to trick when they see him cry about how he doesn't have any money they live him alone and don't ask for money... Bro they are loan sharks. They WERE ready to kill him, how are they suddenly such angels that their entire personalities change with a fucking grown ass man crying ? I couldn't even make it past that, holy shit this is such a garbage. Grammar is meh.