Review Detail of nacht in God Of Destruction in Tower of God

temporary review: writing quality is shit, in "chapter 1" author want to write scene in this fanfic with background music but instead doing like this: *playing : music a* narrative / character talking narative / character talking narative / character talking author : *playing : music a* music lyrics narrative music lyrics narative music lyrics narative wth is that it's make my eye and brain hurt after re-read the beginning part of "chapter one" to comprehend what author want to write and it make my eye and brain hurt. for story development, character design, updating stability, world background rating i am unable to decide and will rate it 4 star with expectation that this fanfic is good