Review Detail of tohru_chanowo in Powerful Wolf Girl

Hey guys! Reviewing my own story on the 1st chapter. It bit weird, but I'm fine with it. Anyways, let me just say some things. I'm a beginner, so please don't say things like, "oh, your story sucks" or "why are you doing this." It's really not nice so if you don't like this story, just leave, okay? I'll try to improve on the grammar and the story description so the plot will be more clearer. Anyways, please, please, please, PLEASE, give this story a chance. I know it kinda sucks and the story is kinda lopsided, but for some encouragement, can you at least try it? Say something in the chapter comments to say something I need to improve on? Because when people don't say anything, I don't upload anymore. I just delete it. Because I'm not gonna keep a story someone nobody's gonna read. So please....give this story a try? I will appreciate it a lot. Thank you! From, Author T