I'll be blunt it's a solid idea with a good execution with everything other then the biggest part of any story grammar the grammar is so hard to understand that it takes a minute to decipher if you don't have you trusty rosetta stone to decipher these hieroglyphics then don't read that's a but of a hyperbole I'll be honest yes it's hard to read, but that doesn't mean you shouldn't continue it is good, and I'll continue because I've read worse, but yea
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