Review Detail of Aeipathy_02 in Mr. Knight is a Coldblooded Sweetheart

Another story that is definitely a cup of my tea. Review Proper after reading the latest chapter 5. Writing Quality. The narratives are clear and easy to read. Everything is also described neatly and more vividly. Stability of Updates. I won't dwell on this more. Take your time building your chapters. Quality over quantity. Story Development. In writing an online novel, the readers will be more hooked in the following; Conflict First: Begin your story with an eye-catching conflict rather than illustrating backgrounds or information; The rule of thumb is to begin your story in such a sequence as: the MC's ___ situation-->the MC does ___ or encounters ___ --> the following consequence pushes the MC into a ___ (new) situation. The author has achieved this in his first chapters which hooked the reader right away. Then on the romance part, I hope it would develop more and not just the usual trope where because female lead saves male lead, he falls in love with her because of that. Or if that's the case, I hope it would be more justified as the story progressed. But I love the development and their encounter so far. 😌❤️ Character Design. As I've read the synopsis and so far from the first chapters, Dylan has the disposition of a powerful and cold-blooded knight. While Leticia's true identity was yet to be revealed. But I find her more intriguing this way. There are so many "what's" that I want to know about her. World Background. So far there is so much that can be fleshed and discovered in the setting as it is still beginning. Overall this story has great potential. Keep it up, author! I look forward to more.