The story sounds interesting, there is a mystery around the FL and a powerful ML. I wonder how the story will develop. Will the ML be able to protect the FL I'm so curious. Character Design: I can't really comment on that since the story is still at five chapters. But the ML seems to be someone with power and value which is great, I'll see how he will develop following the story. Story development: For now it's okay, it's too rush or too slow. Writing quality: the writing is good and simple too. Overall, the first five chapters are promising, they already give you a glimpse of what will be the struggle of the ML while keeping a mystery on the FL identity and problem! Keep going!!
enoyann
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