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Review Detail of Kellr in Reincarnated as an Undead Lord with a... WW2 System?

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too many of the words: uh, alright, um, etc the story gets unnecessarily detailed and irrelevantly uninteresting from the first contact chapters as the main character is totally ignored and the story seems to be running out of ideas. quite bad, but pretty good at start

Reincarnated as an Undead Lord with a... WW2 System?

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Thanks for the review! I knew someone would eventually call me out, I'm not even sure how this lasted 9 chapters lol but sure, that's what you get for getting warned with something that quite literally was made on a whim. I mean, this was rewritten 4 times now already actually. I might just try to make another a similar but more "cohesive" story all together after I complete this nonsensical thing. I just wanted to do some guns blazing, but my mindset got stuck with undead morality (whatever that is) which is sad. Thanks for the review regardless.

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Regardless, thanks for the review!