Review Detail of Barkhant in My game account in another World

If the novel has many visits, I will correct the writing of the chapters, I translate the text with the google translator, from Spanish to English and the language or some details are translated differently, as well as accents. I will not abandon the novel as it is my hobby, Discord: Barkhan # 0731. I would like opinions whether to add ***** scenes later or continue like this, since sadly that makes a novel more popular (I know why the cousin of a friend of my friend is doing well), what do you think ?.