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A NIce novel, good plot, and System genre never get old, if this gets more polished this can be a masterpiece. To author keep updating and improving, I see the potential in your novel, and many rooms to improve.

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My first book so it's to be expected. I plan to come back and spruce it up sometime before getting too far ahead.