sorry (my opinion) it's just there was no proper background for mc and there were a few details of s system that were not revealed beforehand, and they have to figure it out by themselves. It was not explained properly about his personality and feel kind of rushed. Tho the story's idea is good overall I just wish you let him show his opness more and more of his inner thoughts
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