The two chapters I've read, I've not seen any grammatical errors. It's really well written. The way you set it up was great as well. It felt like I was watching a movie or a show. The transitions from one scene to the next is very fluid as well. Looking forward to more chapters :)
Chaoscaller
Liked it!
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