Review Detail of imjusttryingthings in Genius, Billionaire, Playboy, Philanthropist, and... Gamer?

~Author here~ If you hadn't guess it from the name of the fic, it's a story about Tony Stark with a Gamer system. I don't know what else to say, besides that it starts off in RWBY. This shouldn't be too much of a spoiler, but he will end up visiting other words, and at some point even he might even return back to the Marvel World. Chapters are fairly long. I aim for about 5k words for each. I hope my grammar isn't too bad, but if you find any mistakes, do point them out for me. Thanks for reading!