Review Detail of Retro_Plaid in Marvel: The Ghost

Item: Marvel: The Ghost
Rating: 3.6

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Retro_PlaidLv41yrRetro_Plaid

Honestly this story seemed good at the start but it slowly developed as if he didn’t live a previous life and was still a kid. I believe the story would be much better if the MC was an OC in the MCU not reincarnated and doesn’ have future knowledge bc the way he is acting is too childish for no reason.

Marvel: The Ghost

HairyPotah

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BalladLv5Ballad

I saw Peter Parker in Chapter names And decided to skip lol. Every single story has Peter he's like the Hermione of Marvel it's ridiculous.

1yr

Daoist_DanLv10Daoist_Dan

Feel like most authors drop the mental image of the adult (If they ever formed one) in place of the younger one. So they begin writing scenes that would fit that younger character. That's my advice. Picture a full on adult in their interactions. Even when surrounded by a bunch of kids. That's the proper amount of disconnect that should be happening.

1yr