Review Detail of Itsuki_Suzuki in My Time System

Before I quit here. I will leave you an honest review and message on my story. I will answer the questions. Why is the story so bad. That conversations are so tedious that people have no character development and exact identity? In total I didn’t really write a storyboard in season 1 of My Time System. I know and I admit that the chapters I made were hideous. The season 1 It's kinda rush. My grammar is pretty wrongly and I’m not doing well to correct that. The plot of the story is meaningless because there is no thrill to the reader. Moreover, the chapters are too short. I also have no experience in writing so this is just how I work. Why does it take so long to publish a story and then be so short? I repeat what I have to say because I am doing some school works and I am dealing with a chronic illness that will shorten my life. I'll just say another illness I'm dealing with right now, I also admit that I'm mentally unstable so I quickly develop anxiety and depression. One of the chronic diseases I have is G.E.R.D. , I have been fighting this for 2 years and it is almost incurable, which has led to Oral and Throat Cancer. There are the diseases I'm dealing with, that's not all. Why am I writing? Whenever I am writing, it gives new hope to myself that one day I will be able to overcome all these trials. I also write to pursue my mother’s dream. 1 month hiatus will happen in the month of May, so I can fix the storyboard of season 2 and get ready for MGS. That's all I'm going to tell you. One of my dreams is that I finish this novel, please help me to finish this, before terrified day has come to my life. By the way I'm just a highschool student with a lot of regrets in life. So guys don't waste your long life on useless things because it was never given to me.