Review Detail of dallaswander_ in The Eye of Zeus

Sorry, I just read until Chapter 9. But this book screams “Showing”. Ever heard of “Show don’t tell”? This book is descriptive especially in the Prologue part, the action scene. From Chapter 1-9, the phasing of every chapter is good which makes the story exciting. Sentence construction and the writing tone are also good, makes the story not boring to read. Dialogue and Action tags are used properly. The POV used is fitted on this type of story.