Review Detail of Tipota in the vampire monarch

I am very so- you know what I can't be nice to this sir, I am not a writer I did this for fun, and even I admit I cannot write but that does not give you the right to be a to a piece of crap ok I HOPE YOU A NICE DAY!!!!! p.s I am not telling you to stop giving criticism but when you're doing it be nicer it's hard to write ok sir (btw if your a female I don't really care :)