not bad, but i still cant really judge with just 33 chapters, i like it so far though, seems promising. SPOILER: in chapter 34 i whole use daze on the man with the crossbow and also if they are still alive after the mana flames, then Beatrice could have some fun, and also levelling up a couple of times from EXP from killing them, for example by gagging on her rod to death jejejeje.
YuujiEveryleaf
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ถูกใจThanks for the positive feedback! I’ll keep on trucking. Maybe one day I’ll even improve enough for you to bump the rating XD
NirvanaPenguin:i read until 49, yeah its looking great, keep up the good work man 😁. By the way, I'm also writing one for fun too. 😄 /* SPACE COLONIST in the oceanic world ARK */image
i read until 49, yeah its looking great, keep up the good work man 😁. By the way, I'm also writing one for fun too. 😄 /* SPACE COLONIST in the oceanic world ARK */
YuujiEveryleaf:So, after reading some additional chapters, what is your view on this novel now? :)
YuujiEveryleaf:Thanks for the positive feedback! I’ll keep on trucking. Maybe one day I’ll even improve enough for you to bump the rating XD