The only complaint I have is the bad grammar, but it's not unreadable. Besides that, I don't have many complaints. The MC has a well explained early life and background, his powers are unique and if I'm not wrong, original(Claim them author), and it's the MCU so the world background is 5star. Good work so far, fix your grammer with free Grammarly(I use it and I'd give it a 5 star) and keep writing.
I_am_potato_lord
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ถูกใจI_am_potato_lord:lol i use grammarly. i reread each chapter twice after correcting it with grammarly as well. can u point out grammar mistakes so tat i can correct it. there is a limit to free grammarly hahaha.