Review Detail of PaperCrow in Pirate or Revolutionary? It doesn't matter, let's follow our Boss(Mc).
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Gonna be real, so far the story is good i like that the story is going down a different route than most one-piece fics which are almost always pirates or marines. The only problem i have is that he/she, he/her is non stop switching sometimes even mid-sentence. welp anyway heres hoping that will get better as the story goes on.
Pirate or Revolutionary? It doesn't matter, let's follow our Boss(Mc).
Tennouji_Kotarou
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It is because of the translator, my first fanfic I wrote in 1st person and this is the first time writing in 3rd, what I noticed is that the translator confuses the name Sora as female, even if he puts the translator corrects him as she does. And there are also a lot of things in English that can go for both ***es, but I can't find that, I'm always reviewing the chapters, and I always remove Sora's ela *, but by the way there are still some that I can't differentiate from English for my tongue.
Lol, for example now, the translator translated very badly, I always have to revise passages like that word for word, just so that the translator understands and is legible (at least in the page translation.)
Tennouji_Kotarou:It is because of the translator, my first fanfic I wrote in 1st person and this is the first time writing in 3rd, what I noticed is that the translator confuses the name Sora as female, even if he puts the translator corrects him as she does. And there are also a lot of things in English that can go for both ***es, but I can't find that, I'm always reviewing the chapters, and I always remove Sora's ela *, but by the way there are still some that I can't differentiate from English for my tongue.