I feel like this fan fiction has some potential. It possibly needs more background details, and if the story was a bit faster in its pacing then perhaps it would be more enjoyable. The grammar was pretty good, but I have noticed a bit of problems.
GamerFoxRedeemed
ถูกใจ 2 คน
ถูกใจไม่มีการตอบกลับ เป็นคนแรกสิ!