Review Detail of RustedSoul in My new item can raise infatuation, but!

I like the story and concept a lot. There is a lot of development and internal dialog which can be used to understand situations and events. Progression is also very good as the transitions from one event to the next does not feel out of context, place, or weird. the only thing would be writing errors here and there. I understand what it is saying even with the errors but it is just here and there.