Review Detail of Ritankar_Sarkar_ in Dargolth Kaiser and The Djiins

Seems like A typical **** story- But I surprisingly changes into a fantasy one; The level of suspense you create; shortens my vocab to describe- For the plot- I think it's fine with every writer who writes, from a readers veiwpoint it's really a great one. In last, I would suggest the Author to re-visit and re-edit the initial chapters- I spotted you got some mistakes there; but it's okay! For overall- I hope you get the attention you deserve!