One complaint: I didn't see any mc char development....(Even thought mc bit 'Uncontrollable' for no reason after timeskip) Except for that everything is okay from my point..... It has a potential thought.
Yeah, I'm trying to fix that problem😅😅 That's why Im giving MC a little bit of problem with families or some shit like that😬 If you have any suggestions for improvements, please tell me... I'm all ears😁 Thank you for reading the fic😇😇