I thought it was great. The writing in the beginning is a bit cliché/cheesy, but after Captain Cold, I feel like you really start writing something that could be in a real book. I wish you could describe what the background of the characters/setting is, but overall, really great.
MagicLover2007
Liked it!
ถูกใจWill there be romance or are you not confident writing that yet? Also, will it be straight romance or yuri romance if there is romance?
MagicLover2007:Thank you so much for your feedback! If you want a better character background, you can check out my Wattpad account that describes Biana/Linh in a better way.
I'm not quite sure. Do you have any recommendations? I have thought about romance, I just can't seem to find the right person. I would prefer to write Biana to be straight, but I can do bi/gay.
BreezyNovels:Will there be romance or are you not confident writing that yet? Also, will it be straight romance or yuri romance if there is romance?
Don't really have recommendations unless you are doing the entire DC universe. But I would prefer yuri romance since the boys in DC either tend to have very big egos or are damaged somehow. Either one is fine with me, Raven is my favorite waifu in DC rn so....
MagicLover2007:I'm not quite sure. Do you have any recommendations? I have thought about romance, I just can't seem to find the right person. I would prefer to write Biana to be straight, but I can do bi/gay.