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Review Detail of EmpRabbit in Interplanetary travel records: Encounter

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I love Sci-Fi books and yours seems to have an interesting start. For your descriptions, try to be a bit more on the point and don't try to put everything in a sentence as this may be harder to read. Other than that this seems to be a great start. Well done!

Interplanetary travel records: Encounter

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Thanks for the review.