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Review Detail of Rancholo12 in Immortal With A System?

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Rancholo12
Rancholo12Lv143yrRancholo12

While largely similar to solo leveling that is not a bad thing as sometimes the old saying ‘if it ain’t broke don’t fix it’ the plot is developing nicely but, with some typos I cannot give it a higher writing quality. I hope the author can keep up the good work and I am looking forward go how the story continues.

Immortal With A System?

DrEver

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DrEver
DrEverนักเขียนDrEver

Thank you for the review, honestly I just recently read solo leveling and noticed they were similar. a lot of my ideas I got from roleplaying on my spare time and never knew, since solo leveling is so big I'm afraid there will be lots of people saying that. Also, I will go in and try to fix as many typos as I can, it's just that I have a limited amount of time to write because of my job and what not. I will take this review to heart, much appreciated 1h

Rancholo12
Rancholo12Lv14Rancholo12

Its fine as long as its not some rehash like some stories on this app most people will like the story