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I feel like your plot is a good concept. But there are a few things to focus on. think of writing as painting a picture. tell me what the characters are doing as they talk. describe the expression they are showing as they speak. And please don't advertise on someone else's work. it's really annoying. but I wish you goodluck 😊

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you got it