There aren't many grammatical errors and the sentences are easy to understand. The presentation of the main character's adventures is not bad, but I have a problem with information about the world, it is completely unknown where it is, what is the name of this place or information about the sect itself. Besides, I think it's enjoyable to read. Stability of updates: usually it is 2 chapters a day, so a big plus for that. - there is also a plus for the fact that the main character has a goal. The total score : 4.4 for encouragement
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