Review Detail of Sully_Munster in My Time Control System

So for those reading this book the MC seems to be growing fast, however he is still considered weak compared to how the entire story will be followed. Unfortunately I cant always keep up with releasing chapters due to real life issues. Im still working on how i want to develop my characters right now so they may seem abstract and i have yet to fully get into the history of the story. I know ive opened up a few questions in readers minds and i promise you these questions will be answered as i tie things into the story. Im working on fixing grammatical errors and such so if you notice anything feel free to let me know in a review so i can better my writing prowess. I'm hoping to get a contract opportunity so i can focus onnthis story even more. There's a lot i want to do with this story but sometimes i just wing it.