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Review Detail of Gabriel_Ursu in The Soul Keeper

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The synopsis is no good, you practically spoils the reader, create a background of enterily sth else u write, even put reincarcation in tags for what. Is like we can skip all the story to the part of reincarnation and boom nothing is affected except some mc changes or shit, everything is restarting (kind off u start writing the past life of an mc reincarnated like the great thief, the strongest sword god, and continue with the story in the actual novel) and if somehow the situation in synopsis changes, u choosed a wrong hook for the readers and is returning back to you with negative feelings. Not talking about how bad the mc is in the start

The Soul Keeper

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