it's actually too early for me to give a review because you only got 4 chapters, It is fine though, The way how your story progress was pretty interesting, and the way how the characters were developed were pretty good too. Consistency and more Character development is what I can suggest in your future chapter! Good luck!
liyanpark1013
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