Review Detail of ShrillMouse in The Undead's Messenger

Someone said I should do a shameless review here so here we go! This isn't your usual fantasy novel. There are no Systems here and there are psychological reasons behind every action they choose. This story is inspired by the 2002-2003 Warcraft III, with a bit of twist and turns. If you don't like the MC struggling, there are times where he is a total badass but most times, he will need to struggle and rise to power. I don't really like the MC overpowered already since it will make the story predictable