Review Detail of Drakonous in Unearthly Beauty

An enjoyable read that focuses on demonic mythology subverting my initial expectations on the various races that were introduced as being magical (Fey). The characters are very amusing and three dimensional with the pov style not feeling ... cliched? Y'know, the feeling most pov novels give where you just roll your eyes and go "Oh, it switched again. Awesome. Who's this again?". Yeah, this one didn't give me that. Grammar is good, some errors in the dialogues but that actually gives flavor to the characters speaking (native speakers are very informal when talking, ignoring grammar and using slang) so that's a nice touch that's appreciated. The FL, Cerise, speaking French occasionally is also a great touch that increases her personality while making her exotic. There's also something really nice about how mature the characters are. One thing I've faced backlash on with my female characters is how they've had relationships with men before officially getting together with the MC, but it's just realistic. Like here, Cerise, she's been in a relationship before meeting the ML, Deimos, and it's just refreshing to see this: characters acting like real life people and each of them respecting each other despite everything. One thing that I felt could be improved (and this is me nitpicking) are the love scenes. Some of the words are ... too p*rn-ish instead of er*tic. Like, a little improvement by changing words would be nice and make it more sensual (for instance, instead of using pu*sy or c*ck, use words like honeypot, rod, spear, etc or instead of thrust/dig use burrow, tunnel, delve, impale). Other than that, the scenes were well written and, unlike most smut, driven by plot rather than being the plot. This alone gives the novel a high rating but combining that with an intriguing plot serves to make the story all the more enjoyable and interesting.