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Illusionniste
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I love how this story is compelling to me, I thoroughly enjoyed it. The bird spanking had me 🤣 First chapter was already great, it had me hooked for more. It already tells me how the story would be like. The characters had personalities that I so love about it. It made them real to the readers. Kalani was an interesting character to read, he made me like him and the whole reason why it took for me to write this review because I was too absorbed with the story. How could I forget Whistle. That bird is everything. Whistle is perfect. We all need a bird like Whistle. (This is lowkey a review about how majestic Whistle is) World building was decent, I could imagine some places, others took a while for me to picture it. I do suggest taking time to expand the world building. So the whole story is tangible to the readers. I didn’t notice any grammatical errors because I was too busy enjoying the story. As person who loves details, this story had small amount of details but I couldn’t careless because the story arc makes up for it. This story had that lure for me, it made me entranced with the story and I love it. It had me wanting for more. The story arc is riveting with characters that made me like them. Especially, Whistle.

Memories Like a Dagger

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Glad you enjoyed the story ! Hope you stick around for more ! P.S. I do know that worldbuilding is my weakest point, so could you clarify which places you had trouble imagining ? It would be a major help to me. (๑╹ω╹๑ )