Review Detail of Fanessia in TUP(OLD)

A nice love story. I like the outline of the story. Buuttt... there is so many different POVs. Kind of makes you wonder who is the real MC. From the start of the novel, the current wife of the king is implied to be the bad person. It makes me wonder about her background. The story seems to be promising however. Maybe write the character's name then the chapter title? Or something.