I love the plot. It's very interesting. And it's good how the readers participate in the story as the camera. The dialogues really show the characters' personalities and attitudes. The first point of view narrations really gives the characters their opinions and feelings. The only problem is the punctuations and grammar. But overall, it's great!!
Selina_Re
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