Review Detail of Zulu2018 in Waking up in an Unknown World- Celestine (Book 1)

So far so good 😊 the world building needs some work but it’s ok I’ve seen worse. The grammar and structure of sentences needs some help but I don’t know if english is your first language if not then understandable why the grammar a little wonky. Your putting of commas and qutation needs some work as well. Overall this book have potential its a diamond in the rough and needs polishing to make it a good book thats unforgettable😗 Oh the synopsis also needs to give us a clear understanding of what we are going to read so I advise you to fix the synopsis to help the readers better understand what there going to read. The picture if you want to know is made by @Flower_poya (that’s her insta) so if you want her to make a cover there you go her info. I’ll give a 4.5 rating since I see a lot of potential for this book you just need some advice and guidance to get there😁 Ok im done ya’ll I hope you update more since do really like this story👍🏽