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Well...the premise was good, enjoyed the concept of a baker in SnS, desserts and pastries are the only really covered by that one elite ten memeber, the child. But, as Ron Burgundy says, it escalates quickly. Now, I can get behind the idea of an arranged marriage as a plot device and shinomiya is pretty and quirky, but like wow one minute they're meeting for the first time, she's what 16-17 and he's in his mid-late 20s, the next they're fucking AND THEN SHE GETS PREGNANT !?!??!??! other than that, nothing is really explained, like how she knows the Aldini brothers and why Soma is a prick. Fin.

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You know I actually agree with you on that. She know the Aldini brother's threw her father. I was in a mood when writing this. I am thinking about going in and rewriting or just going with it and make it better than how it started. I thank you for the comment and hope to do better in the future.