Its extremely good! very few things i would improve on and the grammar can be considered on spot and with almost no mistakes to be found unless one focus hard. So far its 8 chapters and im already hooked. I really like MC interactions with the guild, but hopefully you can expand that a little more, specially with erza and mira. I really enjoy the idea of yugioh cards being used in Fairy tail and i absolutely love dark magician girl xD... This is my spot lol... I would really enjoy it a lot more if it develops in a harem and seen how things are going its not going to be forced and be naturally created. Personally, the harem should be 5 members, being magician girl, erza, mira, levy and cana. Also maybe mc can completely heal erza's eye and interact more with her since he know knows requip magic, which he can ask erza advice on plus learning swordmanship under her
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