good story it has the power to draw people in. am not good with writing so i would not know if you use good writing style and i hope it could turn into a comic you need to work on developing the characters the other two thing need i do not know mach about it this is taken from reading the first and part of second chapter the book is interesting and i like it
artsmylife
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ถูกใจartsmylife:ah thank you for the review, I'm always working to try to improve my story, so any tips to point me in the right direction are welcomed